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Old 05-03-2009, 02:26 AM
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Xstatic KiD on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads
3rd verse Open

Tell me if you want to colabo and ill send the FINISHED file thru AIM
Sn: Mocash299

il decide if you can get on the track or not



tell me what you think please, feedback is appreciated

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Old 05-03-2009, 02:30 AM
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Lyrics
verse 1
dam baby girl your so dam sexy,
when you next to me i feel like im on ecstasy,
i can be your man and you be my girl,
and il love you untill the end of the world,
if you need me il be there for you whenever,
be by your side thru da stormy weather,
its meant to be me and you together,
if you it to last it can last forever,
i stay hustlin stackin that chedda,
but when im on da grind, your alwayz on my mind,
Baby gurl ur only one step away,
i know that you got your eyez on maye,
i know that you wanna be be mah bay bay,
all i wana do is call you my baby boo,
constantly thinking of you, girl i dream of you,
so if were together, its like a dream come true,

verse 2
so much sex appeal, pleasure is all you will feel
pull down that thong, we can do it all night long,
quit da chit chat, bend over and let me hit that,
from da bed to da floor, you'll be beggin for more,
hitin you like you was endo, got game like nintendo,
so many beautiful girls up in the bay,
il listen to whatever you have to say,
il be your Tylenol cuz il take the pain away,
stick to the plan, say your my # 1 fan,
girl lemme be your superman, we can fly away,
il always be there for you, right by your side,
the day i make it and i go world wide,
il still be with you, n ill still love you,
if your a scooby snack then baby im scooby doo,
i love everything about you, im diggin your style,
id walk a thousand miles, just to see you smile,

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Old 05-03-2009, 02:53 AM
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Thai or Chuckie Akenz u tryn 2 Colabo?
Dizzaholic, Loc V, Young Jay, Lady SoLoC, 2-Sicc?

Colabo
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Old 05-03-2009, 02:54 AM
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zSHARE - Baby Gurl.mp3
3rd verse Open

THIS IS NOT THE FINAL VERSION, still gotta edit it a little bit

Tell me if you want to colabo and ill send the FINISHED file thru AIM
Sn: Mocash299

il decide if you can get on the track or not



tell me what you think please, feedback is appreciated

lmao


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Old 05-03-2009, 08:38 PM
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Updated track

Thai or Chuckie Akenz u tryn 2 Colabo?
Dizzaholic, Loc V, Young Jay, Lady SoLoC, 2-Sicc?

Colabo...
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Old 05-03-2009, 08:40 PM
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Working at: Drum Instructor at Sam Brannan Middle School & JFK High School
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i agree: lmao.

whack sauce.

this is not tight.
your lyrics are stupid.
your grammar is bad.
and you didn't even say some of the words you have written in your lyrics.
i'm sorry to be such a downer... but this burned my ears.

"terrible." -Soosh*e's cousin Jimmy.

hate on me if you want.. but beware of the reprecussions.


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Old 05-03-2009, 09:28 PM
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Niga u a fagget, ur lyrics whack,
u been rappin for 3 years, i been rapin for a couple months n im still better then you.
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Old 05-03-2009, 09:36 PM
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i'm not even gonna argue with you. let the people speak.
you have no rhythm whatsoever and you SOUND like an amateur.
step your game up. you're definitley not a factor.


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Old 05-03-2009, 09:42 PM
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Niga u a fagget, ur lyrics whack,
u been rappin for 3 years, i been rapin for a couple months n im still better then you.
you've been "rapping for a couple months" for the past 6-7 months dude. stop using that as your damn excuse.


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Old 05-03-2009, 09:56 PM
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Niga u a fagget, ur lyrics whack,
u been rappin for 3 years, i been rapin for a couple months n im still better then you.
that's why you aint elevatin man, you can't take criticism. if you can't look at yourself for areas to improve on you never will. real talk
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Old 05-03-2009, 09:58 PM
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that's why you aint elevatin man, you can't take criticism. if you can't look at yourself for areas to improve on you never will. real talk
gimme feedback, on what to improve on
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Old 05-03-2009, 10:02 PM
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what i said before, your rhyme structure needs to be more polished. too often your flow is jerky because you're rushing to finish the bar or dragging out syllables to hit the snare. that's the biggest problem imo.

your lyrics also need to get better content wise. but for now work on 1 thing at once. if your rhyme structure is good, flow follows. flow is the one most important thing, because without that, you can have a badass delivery or fire for lyrics and it will still sound off
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Old 05-03-2009, 10:06 PM
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Ethnicity: Vietnamese - what's gook'n?!
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Thai or Chuckie Akenz u tryn 2 Colabo?
Dizzaholic, Loc V, Young Jay, Lady SoLoC, 2-Sicc?

Colabo
haha again
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Old 05-03-2009, 10:31 PM
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Well the beat was good,

from what I can hear just work on your flow more

it look rushed imo so yeah =/
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Old 05-06-2009, 06:24 PM
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So who wana Collabo?
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