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07-06-2009, 05:21 AM
Ethnicity: Viet/dominican
Reppin': 617 bruah
Working at: Album seller
School: Snowden High int
Interests: collecting fitteds
Favorite Music: of course my music
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i was playing around with the mix and mastering shit, and this what i got, idk if it sounds good, but up too you
and seriously DROP LINKS i will check them out, no doubt
thanks for checking
zSHARE - Im So High.mp3
zSHARE - Im So High.mp3
zSHARE - Im So High.mp3
07-06-2009, 10:12 AM
Ethnicity: Filipino
Reppin': Chicago - Las Vegas & Imagination Land
Working at: FTFRADIO.NET MANIMHIGH.COM FTFRADIO.COM
School: School of Broken Dreams
Interests: http://manimhigh.com STORIES OF THE HIGHLIFE
Favorite Music: The Original AR's Skitzoe
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you gotta work on your bars you start off fine then you start trying to fit in to many words on one line especially in the hook... you gotta work on your flow more it's an improvement but you still got a long way to go...
07-06-2009, 10:17 AM
Ethnicity: Viet/dominican
Reppin': 617 bruah
Working at: Album seller
School: Snowden High int
Interests: collecting fitteds
Favorite Music: of course my music
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AIM: knight617xXx
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thanks for your info, appreciate the love tho, you want me check any of your song out?
07-06-2009, 01:15 PM
Reppin': Milpitas
Favorite Music: Anything thats good..
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Member Since: Dec 2008
AIM: MoCash299
Posts: 1,250
Props: -1
chill off da auto tune T Pain lol
its all about Metaphores, there like cheap whores
07-06-2009, 01:31 PM
Ethnicity: Vietnamese
Reppin': H-Town
Working at: I'm the Boss of all Bosses
Member Since: Jul 2007
Posts: 1,938
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
XstaticKiD
chill off da auto tune T Pain lol
its all about Metaphores, there like cheap whores
Too bad you can't even afford those.
You're improving Jay, just keep at it. Skitzoe covered what needed to be said.
Pessimism is an investment in nothing; optimism is an investment in hope.
07-06-2009, 04:54 PM
Ethnicity: Viet/dominican
Reppin': 617 bruah
Working at: Album seller
School: Snowden High int
Interests: collecting fitteds
Favorite Music: of course my music
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Member Since: Jul 2008
AIM: knight617xXx
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thanks Dumpling, im trying hard each day, thanks guys for the feedbacks and some pointers, will take a look at all and improve the area i needed to be covered
07-06-2009, 05:20 PM
Reppin': Milpitas
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
DumplinG
Too bad you can't even afford those.
You're improving Jay, just keep at it. Skitzoe covered what needed to be said.
your mom gives me discounts
07-06-2009, 05:34 PM
Ethnicity: Viet/dominican
Reppin': 617 bruah
Working at: Album seller
School: Snowden High int
Interests: collecting fitteds
Favorite Music: of course my music
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AIM: knight617xXx
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yo xstatic, dog, get serious really, thats why you havent improve ever since beggining
07-06-2009, 05:55 PM
Ethnicity: Cambodian but I Talk Money Fluent
Reppin': LYNN CITY, STREETS OF MA COASTIN ON THE EASTSIDE OF THE MAP
Interests: I Smoke Piff On a Daily Basis
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Member Since: Oct 2008
Posts: 948
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whats good fam u started off str8 but u started fallin off quickly u needa work on your bar placement wen u write make sure the words fit in the bars it sounds like ur squeezin in a few extra words but keep at it fam 100
07-06-2009, 06:56 PM
Member Since: Jan 2006
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I hear some slight improvement.
Focus on your writing game, make sure everything fits your bars without having too much or too little syllables to fill them. Slight syllable pauses are good too.
Keep at it.
EDIT:
Drop autotune, it doesn't suit your voice or delivery.
07-07-2009, 01:11 AM
Ethnicity: Viet/dominican
Reppin': 617 bruah
Working at: Album seller
School: Snowden High int
Interests: collecting fitteds
Favorite Music: of course my music
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AIM: knight617xXx
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Thanks LC for restating in a better meaning, appreciate it homie, and Bucko , do the real thang, thanks
07-07-2009, 01:31 AM
Ethnicity: Nigger
Working at: Rapper
Favorite Music: My Music
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Member Since: Feb 2009
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
BucKo
suuuuuuuuuuuuuuu whoooooooooooooooooooooopppppppppppppppp
youre gettin better dawg keep it up!
Chicken Noodle Sooooouuuuuup
07-07-2009, 12:15 PM
Ethnicity: Viet/dominican
Reppin': 617 bruah
Working at: Album seller
School: Snowden High int
Interests: collecting fitteds
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AIM: knight617xXx
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^^^^ RickRoss get out you fat COP, lool
07-07-2009, 04:42 PM
Reppin': honolulu
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getting better homie, you should cut that auto tune though haha thats just my opinion but keep doing ur thing and dont stop yo
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