Man I love the chorus. lol.
1st verse: This verse needs to be remix, the EQ is off as shit as well as the compression, then again I don't actually hear any compression. The verse sounds distorted as hell, you should try panning out the dubs instead of keeping them all in the middle. Flow,Delivery, lyrics are all straight, so no comments to that.
2nd Verse: For about a couple of seconds in the beginning, this mofo sounded like ice cube. Listening this far into the song, it sounds like the beat needs to be either turned down or compressed.
3rd verse: like the 1st verse, I would suggest that you seperate the dubs and pan them from left to right.
Overall this track is coo for a club joint, I would suggest ya'll put a break in there some where or a bridge so this song doesn't follow the cliche 3 verse 3 chorus formula.
Rating: 6.5-7/10.
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